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January 30, 2018 at 12:00 AM
Another fun vignette of yours. I'm not totally sure I buy Nani having no reservations about coming on to Lilo, but Lilo suddenly kissing Nani seemed in character, given that Lilo is impulsive and doesn't have much understanding of what most people consider to be appropriate behavior. There were a couple of phrases that were unclear (like “whipping her face”), but I enjoyed it overall, and I'll definitely be checking out the sequel.
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November 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I think it's a great story. maybe if you expand it into more chapters it would be way better.
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June 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fanfic, can't wait for more :) maybe you can do one involving the experiments, just a thought. Good job!
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May 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Will you make a part 2?
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December 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Short, but sweet. Thanks for Nani being hairy.