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October 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The premise is not too original but not too bad either; the play-script dialog style however makes it somewhat hard to read. Reading the author footnotes at the start of each sentence kind of breaks the illusion.
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October 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Can't wait to see what will happen. I'm hoping this story end's up as a harem with Timmy getting all the girls. Will any of Timmy's enemies give him trouble in this story? Will we see the girls fight over Timmy?
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October 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good first chapter! Has potential!