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March 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This was really well-written and I was entertained by it, even though I have only the vaguest familiarity with this fandom. It was a bit disappointing to have Mako turn all noble at the end, but he's probably supposed to be a heroic character, so he probably had to resist. Still, kudos for a great, sexy set-up.
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September 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story, very well written with a slightly disappointing ending!