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March 12, 2020 at 12:00 AM
so in the end she was just a whore?, my god what a way to kill the mood, that was unecessary if i may say so
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October 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
owful
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February 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It says "to be continued" so I and some other people would like it very much if you would continue with the story.
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January 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So I would love it if you could continue this story. I love it so far and I know you won't let me down if you continue (hope you do) ;)
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August 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i do find it a little odd that he gets told "Try not to be a pervert" and he ends up having his cock pulled out at the dinner table lol
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August 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really wish this had been about a woman instead.
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August 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You have a unique concept, but what is your downfall is that it's poorly executed. It looks rushed, uneven, rough and has no flow as a story. But it's not a compleat write off, you just need to go back to the drawing board and start again and polish off the edges.