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July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You evil, sadistic ass! Suzy is the devil, I am now fully convinced. I can't wait to see you put her in her place. Also, good to have you back man.
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July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I wish I could dream of writing this well. This is the first story of yours I've read and I intend to read the rest. I will say this though, I'm thoroughly dissaponted this will only be 3 chapters. Great work! I can't wait for the rest of the story.
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July 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A promising start for the first chapter. Can't wait for the next one!
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July 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This...is amazing. you...are amazing, such a faptastical beginning of a story i can't wait to finish. As a erotica writer, i can safely say that this story is extremley well thought out and more than just porn with a plot poorly wrapped around it. good on ya, mate!