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October 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Great start- good job building anticipation and graphic description
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August 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Good start, but you can't keep me hanging. I want Franicine to take Steve into her mouth, and everywhere eles, and Debbi too.
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September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A good start. Please hurry and complete the story.
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September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
great story looking forward to future chapters
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July 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing. An excellent opening that definitely deserved to be expanded into a full story.
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July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff, man. This place has been missing a good smut story with Debbie in it.
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July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A very good first chapter. A balance of plot and lemon is imperative for any erotic piece.
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good start!
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July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Can you make Steve a little bigger. Also bigger than Stan and haleys bf? Anyways keep it up