rate_review Reviews

keep writing. it is amazing. i cat wait to hear more of mandy's plan

This is a pretty good piece of work. First Grim Adventures story I ever took interest in on this site. So it might go without saying, I hope you continue working on this story and adding more chapters. Though if it takes you time, I understand. It's hard to say where to go from here because they are few female mains or sub characters in the series that are worth attacking. I would imagine the only one left would be that Goddess of Khaos (Chaos) character, Eris, or whatever her name was. But what do I know? Haven't seen the show in ages. XD

"Well, I figured this would happen someday." said Phil
HAHAHAHAHA, OMG, you knew your wife would leave you...for you daughter. your so lame. HAHAHA
good stoire, keep it up.