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June 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ha, love it. great story, great setup. cant wait till u add more. :)
schedule
April 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
While an entertaining setup, it leaves everyone wanting more.
Your writing is fairly well done, though a few details, such as where the characters happen to be standing/sitting would help at times.
Your writing is fairly well done, though a few details, such as where the characters happen to be standing/sitting would help at times.