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for Not exactly the ugly duckling

by DancingBear

person JLinz
schedule June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Not going to lie; I was NOT expecting this type of story on here! This was one of the best stories I have read in quite some time! I liked how you actually kept the sex to a bare minumum and stuck with the romance, the sensual part of things. I also liked the dark parts of the story as well. And, I lost it when Dom stated that he couldn't "smell ants"; how the hell can you smell ants?!?!?! LOLOLOLOLOLOL I'm not an expert reviewer but I do know that this is a story that I will have no problems reading over and over again and I look forward to any other stories that you have; I think you have 2 more, right? Well, let it be known that I WILL read those shortly as well! There were a couple of errors but eh; I chalked it up to the problem that I have: typing faster than you can think! To me, it didn't bother the flow. Great job!

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