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for Not A Drop

by DragonSapphire

person Erock
schedule September 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Different But I liked it. Kenny seems to be the only one who cares about Butters in the fandom world.
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't really sure where you were going with this. You're a good writer and you have a lot of potential though this story leaves a lot to be desired. I liked the introduction, but it was over before you really took it anywhere. And then suddenly they were having sex. It had to re-read it a few times to figure out if that is actually what had just happened.

The sex scene was well written, and then it was mostly oral which, for me, was a major turn off to read that Butters' drank Kenny's urine. I'm so not into water sports. That could have used a warning maybe.

All in all, it was good, the ending was humorous, and I wish you had done more with it.

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