rate_review Reviews

Man imagine my surprise to see that you write two of my favorite stories on the site (this and " Afternoon Affair")! Nice addition with that new chapter here and I really hope you continue with both. This seems like its gonna get good action wise ( sexual and normal) so can't wait to see where it goes and the other is just hot. So I know life can get in the way but whatever you do is always awesome so I'll look forward to it.

Hey glad to see you back at it. I know the work and family stuff can be a bit of a downer sometimes, but glad to see you soldiered on and churned out another chapter! As for the heat well I'm a fat guy so I know how bad it sucks. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Some good stuff going on there I gotta say though little sad about blossoms fate was hoping to see her a bit more outside of the realm of fantasy. I do like the way the story is progressing so far though and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Can we expect a peeping Ron as Anne "applies" the ointment?

Glad to see the new chapter I'm enjoying the story so far. You know even though this was just a chapter for dialog to further the story the way you ended it I can't wait till the ne chapter to see what is up. I hope it's not one of those "Ron the bastard" or " Kim the whore" stories.

I gotta say this is a pretty interesting story so far, I didn't think I'd like it at first but I gotta admit it's really drawing me in can't wait for the next installment.