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November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The story is nice, but the writing is clumsy. Lots of "and" and repetitions, some parts are overly descriptive, making the story painful to read. A shame, because the story itself is quite good.
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October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story it was great. Odd and Sissy all the way.
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October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Other then the fact that it is ,in every way shape and for, impossible to cum for 2 minutes let alone 45, ingnoing that it's a pretty good story. Though my prefered Odd couple is Odd and Sam, Odd and Sissi are pretty cute.