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March 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Pickles' dominance and aggression is hot hot hot!
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January 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic- please continue it!!!
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story was just...WOW! Pickles/Charles is my Dethklok OTP, but I don't think I have ever read one with a submissive Charles before. I can't wait for the next chapter. <3
As for needing help with the accents, I don't really think you need any. You wrote them well enough as it is, although Pickles speaks with a Yooper dialect, not an Irish accent One little thing I will point out to you, though, is that you can't just take dreads out like braids. Either you have to cut/shave them, or it takes a lot of time, effort, and usually some products like conditioner.
As for needing help with the accents, I don't really think you need any. You wrote them well enough as it is, although Pickles speaks with a Yooper dialect, not an Irish accent One little thing I will point out to you, though, is that you can't just take dreads out like braids. Either you have to cut/shave them, or it takes a lot of time, effort, and usually some products like conditioner.
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is your first story??? You did Pickles accent SOOOOO perfect : ) This was so HAWT : ) I look forward to seeing more from you : ))))