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Bart will never be the same! Ingenious use of prompt! Loved this ... thanks for sharing, PW.

wow, just wow. Nice concept. Wouldnt mind seeing this become a kink of barts...

ROFL - Nice twist!

I think I truly lost it when I started picturing Flanders' reaction to finding Bart like this... clever, funny and excellent! :D

I really enjoyed the opening description of our disoriented young man as he slowly realizes what's happening. ?erri's approach and "seduction" are great, and the quick sex scene flows nicely. Even the way you describe her hair near or on his face is very sensual, and despite the pegging she seems very gentle and loving the whole way through. Making him profess his love all the while, and I almost expected "There had to be something kind of sissy about taking a big rubber cock in the ass, but having to also talk about his feelings too was even worse."

"Or Milhouse." That made me laugh, as much for the line itself as for the fact that
Bart having reason to think that is canon. In any case, leaving him there was definitely the right thing to do. :)

Okay, this story cracked me up. Once again, I was cringing as I clicked the link (I feel like such an adventurer when I read your stories, LOL!), but this really had me in stitches. I think the part that had me roaring the loudest was the beginning, with that little "self-referentially" you added to an otherwise ordinary sentence. That one might have busted a rib. And then the tiny little digs at the show ("Or Milhouse." ROFL) and the characters. I have to say, this is probably the first pegging story I read (since I never actually stumbled into a well-written one before), and I really enjoyed it. It was pretty sexy. And it's also the first Simpsons story I read, too, so it's a twofer on the cherry-popping!

Anyway, all in all, awesome job, though I kinda saw the end coming (not that it's a bad thing, though, it made me laugh quite a bit and it also means your foreshadowing techniques are rather good). Bart, sadly, will always be pretty clueless!

The recaptcha for this review was "expert deappred." I get the feeling this means something, but I can't say exactly what...