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October 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. why did you stop writting? Please start writting soon, cause this is the best Zutara story I have read.
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July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting start and I like the premise of the story!
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July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Your take is really unique and I hope you continue soon!
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February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I enjoy how they come togther to get revenge. I'm not a Mako, though I LOVE Mai.
But I do like the fact that Zuko mourns her death. I do hope you will continue.
-jmac1220
But I do like the fact that Zuko mourns her death. I do hope you will continue.
-jmac1220
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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is Magnificent!!! It is allthat needs to be said.
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October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think this is one of the best stories here. I love the way you write. It is filled with dispair and glimmers of hope. I love how you write Zuko and Katara. I think it is excellent. I want more of this and I will wait for your next chapter. FAB
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October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
One of the best written stories here. I love the plot and the flow of this. This story is beautiful and violent at the same time. I am amazed and eagerly waiting for your next chapter. Awesome work
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October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am Loving this. This story is fanstatic. I love your writing style.The way that Zuko and Katara interact is so awesome. You can feel their sorrow and anger. I love that Zuko is soft with her. The third chapter was EXCELLENT. You are an amazing writer.
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October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy that you have updated. It was well worththe wait.
This story is well constructed and so awesome to read. I love the concept you have going and I want to read more. I am already becoming addicted to this so feed me spider
This story is well constructed and so awesome to read. I love the concept you have going and I want to read more. I am already becoming addicted to this so feed me spider
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October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Zuko and Katara are bittersweet and sexy when they are together. I love the facade they portray for their enemies. When love enters their game, how dangerous will become? Did Zuko plan for it?
Your writing is powerful and beautiful; especially with Zuko and Katara. I am jealous and longing for another chapter at the same time. I wait for your continuing excellence with tremors of excitement. Bluflame
Your writing is powerful and beautiful; especially with Zuko and Katara. I am jealous and longing for another chapter at the same time. I wait for your continuing excellence with tremors of excitement. Bluflame