rate_review Reviews

I loved it all I hope that there's a sequel to it so I can see what happens next to them all

now I have to admit this is not a show I'm familiar with, but your title drew me in and then I was hooked. Started with a bang with the slimy milky substance (gotta luv it!) and left it to my imagination whether it ended with a bang or not (ok, couldn't resist)

I really liked Paloma's reply to Noah:

"Ooh!" Noah suddenly slowed down, taking a little more time to press his stiffness into her at slightly different angles. "I think I'm gonna cum too soon," he groaned in frustration.
"Come over any time you want," she gasped. "I'll even give you a key. Just don't stop now!..."

I don't know if you need quite as many euphemisms for male genitalia, but better to have too much variety than not enough (I especially liked 'pocket monster')

very steamy and and enjoyable read!

You know, I have readed this story too, but I din't even readed by who author, and seeing your profile I find that I have encountered a few of your stories, some of them I have liked, some not so much, probably because I have seen those series too little, and the other because I just can't stand the Idea.

Now, this is one of the stories that I just got to read because I was curious, I don't like too much this series, in fact, I usually changed the channel when this series in particular was showing, just because it's completely uninteresting to me, but the title of this story to honest was what catched my atention.

You leaved me whit almost a need to know more to this story, and even ALMOST maked me find some episodes to see and understand this much better, I have a few ideas thanks to the few glinpses I got from these show, but you know, the end was almost imploring to be continued.

But I will not degrade myself to implore to you to put a continuation to something that probably would not get one.

So thank you for the story.