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for Dragon's prey

by ajj77sunhawk

schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that is some dedication. writing while traveling abroad. thank you so much for another great chapter.
person Kuragari
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*does over-joyed happy dance* YAY! LOVED IT! It was heart wrenching but at least they ended up together that time. ^^ It made me happy that Sokka was finally able to admit his wanting to feel needed. Good thing Zuko didn't just let him go. I was scared for a second that Sokka may have fallen off the wall, but luckily for me your not that mean, lol. I'm so glad you liked the picture! In all honesty I love your fic so much it may not be the last one... if that's all right of course. lol anyway, loved it! Have a good holiday and as always, looking forward to more!
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NOooooooo I wanted more story lol. But once again great job ;) I LOVE the ending of this chapter <3 ! Oh to see two spirits intertwine like that *sighs dreamily* lol. I'm hoping the story is not close to its end already :(

Oh a side note.... I started my sculpture ^.^ Oh the things it has done to me lol. I'm in the middle of painting him so only the ruff and unfinished pictures are up but here's a link to one! http://noonetells.deviantart.com/art/My-Dragon-WIP-II-162422645 I'm sad to say I didn't do him the justice he should have gotten :( again I am a crappy artist lol sorry. Once I am 100% done with him I plan to start the wolf-hawk :)
person Robert
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A good chapter, if done up a bit quickly. I hope there's a fair bit more to see. We still haven't seen anything of Aang's, Katara's, Toph's or really a lot of characters reactions. I can't wait to see the next installment.
person Kuragari
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So I know I've already reviewed this chapter but I drew something for you and your fic. If you'd like to look at it it's here: http://kuragari75.deviantart.com/art/Dragon-s-Prey-color-161737056

anyway I hope you like it if you look at it. and as always... LOVE YOUR STORY!!!
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!! This story is amazing!! So please, please, please, please, please update!!
person moiramctaggart
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What a spectacular story. It is believable and well written, with no far-fetched plot holes. You have made me a happy woman, and I will patiently await your next post. Thank you. I bow to you. _o/=)_
person Soph
schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Such a great story! Please continue it... I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am sooooo glad you didn't end there!!!!! And I'm so happy you updated! amazing as always. I admit i was confused for a minute when it said that Zuko couldn't fit through the bars. I know Sokka's probably a bit smaller but he can't be THAT much smaller. XDDD His plan was brilliant by the way!!! I loved it! though i do feel horrible for how miserable they are now. Eagerly awaiting more!!!!
person InfinitysDaughter
schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap that last part sent shivers down my spine! Awesome as always!

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