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for Revenge Is Sweet!

by eltf177

person Shaellin
schedule August 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, whoa! Glad I stumbled upon this! I had no clue you were writing this story, much less that you had posted it. It sounds like you could have used a beta-reader to proofread this before it went up, and there's two places where you had one of the fairies face-down but it wasn't clear to start out with, but other than that nice story. Those witches are so evil! :)

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