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July 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You're doing good so far, you just need to lengthen the chapters some more! I hope see how Adam and Teela will react to getting married. This site needs more stories about Adam/He-Man and Teela being together!
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested in your fanfic idea, but the fic is too short and in script format. I think readers would be more inclined to read this fic if you changed those things.
Just my 2 cents.
Just my 2 cents.
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, slayer of evil.
Short, sweet(I think) and...to the point?
Short, sweet(I think) and...to the point?