schedule
July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
eeeehhhhhhhh.... it was ok. deffinately kind of confusing without spaces or correct spelling. its ok. deffinatly could have been better. let me know if u write more ^.^
schedule
August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story itself is very good, but you REALLY need to work on your spelling, grammar, and punctuation. I had a very hard time just reading through the whole thing. Plot is good, but not well written. Im not trying to be mean, just honest.