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May 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This started wonderfully but ended SO STUPIDLY!
All that build up for nothing. A waste of time.
All that build up for nothing. A waste of time.
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December 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Katara and zuko were completely in character (well, dark zuko character) the entire time! Please please do a sequel with zukos fantasy coming true!!
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December 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
read this a ton a times and still love it.
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July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
******His mouth tightened in silent frustration. They couldn’t just be enemies with benefits?******
BWAHAHAHA!!!
Priceless!
BWAHAHAHA!!!
Priceless!
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July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, Hama didn't really even show Katara any blood-bending moves before Katara had to use it on her. It isn't much of a stretch that Katara picked it up as she went along, and you showed that she was sort of bumbling her way through, without knowing what each move would do.
Now I've got an image of one of the crew walking in to find him naked, beat-up and unconcious.
Now I've got an image of one of the crew walking in to find him naked, beat-up and unconcious.
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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is genius zutara
the dynamics of power passing between them was intense
this story is exhilarating
i love that katara got away before anything happened that is just so rare in these capture stories
when katara seemed to give in so easily i just thought here we go again but then, wow just wow, what an awesome fight/wax scene and then the blood bending and the way zuko was violated by katara was perfect revenge
this story was totally refreshing
seriously you are a trope bender
you are a trope bending master
the dynamics of power passing between them was intense
this story is exhilarating
i love that katara got away before anything happened that is just so rare in these capture stories
when katara seemed to give in so easily i just thought here we go again but then, wow just wow, what an awesome fight/wax scene and then the blood bending and the way zuko was violated by katara was perfect revenge
this story was totally refreshing
seriously you are a trope bender
you are a trope bending master
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April 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The "You may think I'm selfish" quote comes from Ella Enchanted. I think you should make an alternative ending-if some are disappointed at the ending-where Zuko does succeed. Or-a sequel.
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May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A great story, but man, what a disappointing ending. You're such a tease. All that build up and then... nothing. Bummer. You should do another one like this, but this time having Zuko's seduction work.
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October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good story. I'm always a little disappointed in the stories that have Katara giving in too easily. This is more realistic and I kinda like this Zuko too.
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dark Zutara...I love it! Nice job! Stone2fire