rate_review Reviews

Juicy! They're a good pair. I can't really think of much to say here. I don't get into homosexuality, but this was still a good scene, and Sheila did need her help. And I imagine Kareena is pretty lonely there.

This AU chapter added some more plot and layers to the fic. You did a nice job adding in more interplay and while I don't like girl on girl. I did like how this explained a bit more with Kareen and Sheila. Gave the chapter a diffrent pov for people to think over. The sex was plot driven and gave the fic some more meat. So for that alone I can't really fault it. One could say that Kareen wasn't gay or Sheila was stright. But considering the age factors and tramas. I think this was written pretty beliveably. Short of like Methos/Duncan. It's got it's reasons why and it could happen. But for me both chapters were good and I liked them both.