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by piechi

person Misa
schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is so very hot... I adore stories like these... Kyle and Stan being in a relationship, very plain and shy... and Cartman doesn't like it and crashes everything down.
SO very good, I wish there would be more good stuff like this out there.
You did a fantastic job on writing, too. Really, thank you.
schedule November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story was a really sick-sexy story. By which, I mean that it was really sexy, but it also made me just a little bit sick. The end was really abrupt, I agree, but, what else was there really to do, at that point? Unless there's a reactionary sequel or something, there's nothing else to be said. So, I'm trying to give a positive essay, I don't know if that's coming through or not, but I liked the story in a really sick sort of way. Well-written, good characterization, really good story. Twisted, though.
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking dark, lol. Dark and awesome. I could feel the sheer evil pouring off of Cartman the whole time, and that's exactly how I think a snapped-Cartman would act.

Bravo.
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I feel REALLY bad for Kyle and Stan! >_> WOW. It's sad too because this shit could potentially happen, and Cartman could definitely get away with it.
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This an amazingly disturbing and deliciously tragic story. It was well written, well characterized and over all a great read. Don't be afraid to post more of your work, I can tell you right now that you are an amazing author. Good job! I look forward to reading more of your works in the future!
person Spamilla
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
=3 Great work! I thoroughly enjoyed this. I had the biggest urge for a Cartman/Kyle fic and you provided! You are a very good writer. Nice work!
person barrsa
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was fantastic! You have to post more of your stuff! :D

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