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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome addition. Still a few spelling mistakes, but overall it was an excellent chapter. Toph can see. Zuko still doesn't know how to speak to girls, lol. Love it!! : )
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update. I like the part where he sent the vial of meds to Toph. That was a nice gesture. Can't wait for the next update. =D
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice update with chapter 4. It feels goof for Toph to be thinking about Zuko. The only thing I noticed was that there were a few spelling errors throughout the story, but they did not detract my attention from the plot.
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent so far. Hope you do well with yur finals, and update as soon as possible! :)