rate_review Reviews

I'm still liking your story. There's a good balance of sex and adventure, and plenty of romance to tie the two together. Though I am sad that Sokka didn't get to take down Combustion man. You seem fixated on Zuko, and while I know that it is his story, and I'm okay with him being the only lightningbender (what happened Azula!?), I think you're making him a little too powerful, a little too perfect. I would have liked seeing him in a little trouble from the Ravagers, and maybe having Toph or some of the others help him out a bit more than you had. Still, thos're just the gripes of a fanboy. Great story, and keep up the good work!

I really like this story so far. You have the phrasing of a master storyteller, and all the characters are very realistic, in all the scenes. One thing, you seem to spell 'speak' as 'speek' a lot. Great story though, keep it up!

That was awesome
Loved the ending
Loved the Katara/Iroh momment
I love the Katara/Azula pairing. It's so unique...

This is one of the all time greatest stories I have ever read... ever!

You are like, simply amazing.

This story... I can't find the words, but it's good, trust me!

I enjoyed this chapter. The lemon wasn't as detailed as some, and part of me liked that. Still quite a few spelling and grammar errors, but a good read.

Spelling was a little worse in this chapter, but I loved the action. Excellent plot!

I am a little confused by the ending, but I will just wait patiently for the next chapter. Good chapter overall. :)

Nice. I really liked this chapter. Not as many spelling errors, or at least I didn't notice them. I really like the way this story is headed.

A wonderful story that gets better and better with each chapter you write, but there is one knock I have on it: the formatting. For some reason, some of the chapters are formatted in a weird way, or are not displaying correctly.

Thanks for the additions. There were a few spelling & grammar errors, but not bad. Overall a good read. : )