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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finally, more Skyfire/Starscream centric fanfiction.
You have a good premise going; starting back at the beginning of the 'awakening' and leading up to a much different outcome. That's what I'm hoping for, at least.
I really liked how Skyfire wanted to be all 'touchy-feely' when he reunited with Starscream. Dirty minded shuttle. He didn't get any, though. But he's a patient mech, cool and collected; I'm sure a little while longer won't affect his libido any. Speaking o' which, who will be the topper? Skyfire IS the bigger of the two, but Screamy is a dominant personality (or Star could take it while being on top, that always works).
The interactions are descriptive, but not varied. Are you going to include other characters' points-of-view, or just use the main characters'?
I really enjoyed reading this, and hope more is on the way soon!
You have a good premise going; starting back at the beginning of the 'awakening' and leading up to a much different outcome. That's what I'm hoping for, at least.
I really liked how Skyfire wanted to be all 'touchy-feely' when he reunited with Starscream. Dirty minded shuttle. He didn't get any, though. But he's a patient mech, cool and collected; I'm sure a little while longer won't affect his libido any. Speaking o' which, who will be the topper? Skyfire IS the bigger of the two, but Screamy is a dominant personality (or Star could take it while being on top, that always works).
The interactions are descriptive, but not varied. Are you going to include other characters' points-of-view, or just use the main characters'?
I really enjoyed reading this, and hope more is on the way soon!