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March 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story so far, I can't wait to see how to continue this.
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Engaging and highly interesting. YOu have my full attention. I crave more of this new and original story. Please update soon.
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely marvelous. I am hooked on every word. Your dialogue is amazing. More please this story is awesome I love it!
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome. I love the writing. You do an amazing job. I LOVE all your stories they are intoxicating and very well constructed. I love this if you misunderstood before. KEEP WRITING I NEED AND DESIRE IT! SyJen
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the different scenes and how they flow with each other and the story. You are so good at that. The play between your characters is just spectacular. I love reading your work because it excites me and makes me want to have more and more. This is a brilliant piece of writing; please continue
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March 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh how I love the way you compose your writings. You have the best lines. This story is excellent. I love the intrigue in every scene. I love how it flows. Love Zutara Please update ASAP.
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And to end the night with an AWESOME story like this, is perfect. I cannot wait until the second chapter. Love the interaction of your characters and the way you tell a story. Do not stop keep it going. Leedar~
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February 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes please add more because this is absolutely hypnotic. It needs at least 20 to 30 more chapters.
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am deeply into this story. Awesome first chapter grabbed me instantly. I want to be notified when you update please. This is going to be another masterpiece. Bluflame
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am already a fan of your writing; you just made me a fanatic!. This is going to be a amazing piece of work. I can hardly wait for your next chapter please do not keep us waiting too long. Although now is too long I will show patience. spider