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August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!! I need to know what happens!!!! My inner fangirl can't bare not knowing!!
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July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely Awesome! I love this story and I hope you continue SOON! I love the way you write! Blueviper
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i will be straight and to the point "please update soon. your story is great want to read more."
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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love your writing skill it is effortless and intriguing. Your character interaction is excellent. This story is so addictive I was left looking for another chapter but there was none. I want more. spider
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please write more ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!! P.S. ZUTARA WINS ON AVATAR!!! LOOK AT PREVIEW
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really nice flow to this story is it so intriguing I am looking for more. Love the meat of the characters, they have a cause and a reason to be in this story and are not in here just to be in the story. You have a excellent touch to your writing that I am addicted to so ...continue
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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well Done! You are creating something very special with this story. It just puts its hooks into you and you become a very willing reader. Excellent job Send in the next chapter. DOT
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April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for this update for a long while. You did an awesome job. I love the flow and the pace. It is perfect. You do that very well in all your stories. This story is so intoxicating and thrilling I did not want to stop. Where is chapter three?
I love the characters that you chose to be in this story they fit and you dot hem justice even your own character. I will be watching for the next update with excitement. Your stories are a breath of fresh air to me keep it going. OrangePeelings
I love the characters that you chose to be in this story they fit and you dot hem justice even your own character. I will be watching for the next update with excitement. Your stories are a breath of fresh air to me keep it going. OrangePeelings
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April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good. Well paced and intriguing. Hope you do more.
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love what you are doing with this story. It is so clean and thrilling the way you write. The situations that you have them in is so original. I love that very much much. You are my favorite author by far.Keep up the fanstatic work. evoD