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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WHAT.HAPPENED.TO.MAI.AND.ZUKO. YOU SIR HAVE GOT TO CONTINUE THIS...
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice fight sequence. And who knew Aang was so well... equipped. can't wait to read chapter 5 and 6
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April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see you've updated, but you can post chapters when you are ready to. Please post when you can.
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job on the story so far, please add molre to this fic soon.
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, one small error - Smellerbee isn't with them. Neither she nor Longshot have been seen hide nor hair of since "Lake Laogai". Right now the ones accompanying the gang are Teo, The Duke, and Haru. (I don't think there's anyone else.) Other than that, nice opening, though could try working on your grammar a little bit. Until chapter 3. Laters.