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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think this would be a great story but you need someone to spell check it for you and proably add a little more detail it seems a bit rushed
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January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Spell checking and improved grammer would have improved this story, but not much...
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December 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
your story is sort of interesting. I think you need much work on your spelling and grammar. other than that your story is ok at best, in my personal opinion.
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December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude, you need to learn English before you attempt any kind of public writing again. It's like someone from Ethiopia wrote this drivel.
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God!!!! i tried to read this, but i can't get past your horrible spelling!!!