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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful.
In so many ways, your story was beautiful, and I just don't know how to start describing why it's beautiful. It just is. You're writting was gentle, soft and distant, like writting a letter that would never be read by the one person that should have read it. And yet it was also course- abrupt and horrfying, the way you describes scenes, pain and violence, even some of the character's hate. All of was just freakin' well beautiful.
I mean, this story deserves more than just a simple 'omg, that was a sad story! luved it!' this deserves some kind of acknowledgement. To say that the message got through. It did, of course, it was absolutely heart felt and realistic. I hope other's have given you some good reviews to feel good about writting this.
And now to my own awkward oblivious nature...
I know I should have a good idea what this pairing is, and yet I'm not quiet sure of myself to say who I believe the narrator of this story is.
In so many ways, your story was beautiful, and I just don't know how to start describing why it's beautiful. It just is. You're writting was gentle, soft and distant, like writting a letter that would never be read by the one person that should have read it. And yet it was also course- abrupt and horrfying, the way you describes scenes, pain and violence, even some of the character's hate. All of was just freakin' well beautiful.
I mean, this story deserves more than just a simple 'omg, that was a sad story! luved it!' this deserves some kind of acknowledgement. To say that the message got through. It did, of course, it was absolutely heart felt and realistic. I hope other's have given you some good reviews to feel good about writting this.
And now to my own awkward oblivious nature...
I know I should have a good idea what this pairing is, and yet I'm not quiet sure of myself to say who I believe the narrator of this story is.