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for Double Breakup

by eltf177

person eltf177
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks. Your beta-reading brought up a number of points that needed to be fixed, this made for a much better story!
person Shaellin
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice one! I like the changes you made since I reviewed it for you. :)
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