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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I see where you are going with this story and it looks good. Translating from German to English is a bitch, heck I tried sticking to a few german phrases when I was stationed there and those were tough on me also.
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looking Good! I like the idea's your coming up with, they are intriguing. Keep working on your English, practice makes perfect. Do you have Microsoft Word. It is a great word processing program, it might help.
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story plot is interesting and yeah its tough to write in a second language, so hopefully someone will do corrections for you.
please continue with the story
please continue with the story