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I love these two sides of Zuko. Sexy and gentle with Katara, ruthless and deadly with anyone else. Absolutely wonderfulchapter. Happy to see you are posting again. I will be waiting for more FAB

This story is amazingly addictive, it's like a soap opera, only with Avatar!

Come on, you have got to update. Don't you love us - spoil us i tell ya!
This story is damn juicy and ful of drama and romance. Think about it, we neeeeed to read this story. Its a goooood story, a very good story. I love it.

Come on please, don't forget about us and the story. Its too good to give up, please don't give up.

Please update.

One of the best stories here! Keep it coming because I LOVE it! Viewerfinder

I realy liked your story. It was good and exactly what i needed in a story - the family interactions such as Iroh and Azula and Zuko (The fact they they don't want to kill each other, well, Azula and Zuko). Also, your plot is very good, the story is interesting and captivating. I think this is the 2nd of the two stories i've read that i can stomach Tokka. There is much intrigue, but not too much.

You should hurry and update, i've actually now got a reason to come back to adultfanfic. Please, hurry and update, i would love to see the further development b/t Zuko and Katara. By the way, that little tryst scene - i loved it! Sad that it was interupted so far along though. I am glad it was, interupted though, not because i didn't want them to have sexual relations but because of how well and beautifully you wrote that whole scene. Because actually i wouldn'y mind if they did.

Loving Zuko in this, the whole story is good and Sokka is in quite a dilema - i'm really glad toph' spoken up, though i wiahed they were able to get busy, but i like that assination attempt - very well-written. But you see, imma go now as i'll decide to tell you particularly well-writen parts which i really liked and may very well end up re-writing the story in an haphazard order. (I'll try really hard to review on your next update as i really liked this story and have much to rave about though i'm sure you won't want to hear)

Love it!!

Update soon!!!

That was Excellent. You have to update this PLEASE! I am begging you.


Blueviper

Interesting so far, I can't wait to read the rest.

Eveyrone in this story is soooo OOC that it would take me more time to point out all of the OCC-ness that to give you my suggestion: change the names of the characters, rename the story and make it AU where this people are, I don't know, relatives or something of the original characters. If you still want details: Toph would have earth-bent Meng against the wall; Katara would not behave like a wilting flower; Zuko is inherently a kind person and nothing in the TV series indicates that he has a penchant either for mistreating or humiliating women, by the contrary; Sokka would never be cruel to an ex-girlfriend and Iroh would not sit idle by with all emotional abuse. Seriously, watch the DVDs again and re-work this people b/c ATLA they are not.

AMAZING. I absolutely love this story, so much drama!

Absolutely awesome!!! MORE please