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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Please update soon.
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June 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
gooosh ive been reading this since u first put it out ....unless something important has occured plz dont forget about this story!
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June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great so far! Zuko and Katara are so hot together! I like their rough play. Makes things interesting. ;)
More please!
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More please!
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh please, please please update this amazing story, such passions, such emotions, such a storyline it was perfect.
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April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a truly riveting story. Your pacing and intricacies are perfect. I hope you are continuing this, because it's excellent.
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April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading this story and I hope you are planning to continue it.
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well thats two of them I like I hope you keep writing
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an magnificent piece of writing. I will read the entire thing agin this week because I love it so. it flows and blends with such excellence. You are a marvelous writer. Wisdom
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome. You have really worked on improving your skills in writing. I absolutely love this story and anxiously wait for your updates. I too have a hetic life and know how it is, but you never disappoint with every chapter. I think that you are an awesome writer and thinker. vibe
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November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn interruptions! but I love it! I like that there is a reason for stuff happening. Your story just flows and evolves. It is PERFECT to me so do not change a thing...except maybe providing an update. Leedar