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Ooh Xin Fu is up to no good!
LOVE the Zuko/ Katara relationship!

Aang anf Toph together...forget about it! I love the back and forth betweenthem with the underlying attraction beneath it. LOVE IT!!!
How much trouble can one stalker earth bender withe intimate knowlegde of the inner workings of the palaca be? LOTS. I think Zuko is correct in ordering Katara to her room. I also hope he beats the crap out of him.

You are an awesome storyteller!

The flow of your words is excellent. This chapter was awesome. I truly am in love with the way you write and tell this story. It is wonderful and addictive. Aang and Toph together your way is awesome. I love the way you have him thinking it is funny and sexy.
I want to see a massacre of Xin Fu I am sure he will reinvent himself with the rebels once they see he defied the emperor they will want him.
All of your plot twists and dips make sense everything flows into the other. Youare awesome.

This story is a fanstatic work of writing.

You thinkyou know but you don't know. I love the suspense and the way you weave all of your thoughts together in this awesome collection of words is KILLER. You have made me LOVE Avatar again.
Aang and Toph are so right together.I love the banter between them and I cannot wait to see what happenes between Sokka nad Azula because I love them too.
I LOVE your Zuko all powerful and mean to everyone but Katara. I know he will wipe the floor with Xin Fu. I love Katara doubiting herself and the liberties she gives Zuko. I hope that Xin Fu's plans fail and he DIES!!! (just a thought)I wait anxiously for your update because I need it to make my day complete.

Never mind what I said before. This chapter is even better, and it just makes me all giddy! This story is just amazing. Your writing and story telling is really amazing. I just can't wait for what's next. The Aang and Toph couple is adorable. I hope you'll be updating soon !!!! thank you.

This was EXCELLENT! As I have said before you are an amazing writer. You are a storyteller. I am so wrapped up in this I cannot even begin to express my desire to want otread more. You are amazing!

I Absolutely LOVE THIS!!!

There is just something about a good guy not being good all the time. i LOVE the bad Aang and I am rooting for him.
I just knew Xin Fu woudl be up to somethinghe just needed a spark. Now he is planning on trying to take Katara. i hope Zuko kicks his face in. HURRY and WRITE MORE SPOIL US!!!!!

oh boy! this is going to get ugly. in more ways than one. xin fu is playing puppetmaster. aang is trying to put the moves on toph who is supposible in love with sokka. sokka is having mixed feeling about azula. zuko nearly forced himself on katara who needs to get out of the kingdom if you ask me.

I love the twists and turns inthis story. It is a thrilling read and keeps you on the edge of your seat. You are an awesome writer that keeps improving her craft. I love this chapter and I hope you update soon because I'm still on the edge of my seat and I need more!

I loved this chapter. I love this story!

I love the way you write because everything has a reason. You bring a flow and flare to your work that I find beautiful and awesome. I always enjoy every word and I want you to continue with your meager offerings. SyJen