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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Katara has many problems. Zuko and the Fu fighting over her although not quite yet but i think Zuko thinks Fu is up to something. I am with him if your own peeps don't like you something is WRONG. Love the lunch and Toph and Sokka was awesome. Toph vs Ming. She would smush her with a rock and be done with it even if she had four knives. AWESOME STORY!
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bring on the pain. I want it. I need it. I love how this story is progressing awesome job!
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this doesnt look good. can anyone here say possible blood shed.
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful STUFF! Just awesome. I love this story. Wonderful writing and a wonderful author. Thrill us again!!
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Totally terrific update!!!! THis story just keeps on rolling in excellence. More and more after that.
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome please hurry and update I am waiting for it!!!!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome please hurry and update I am waiting for it!!!!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the jealousy thingy!!.
Love Zuko's and Fu's interaction I'm thinking maybe violence could result in a meeting between them no matter what Xin has to say. LOVE Sokka and Toph. She would murderalize that Ming person. What is Zuko going to do to our Water maiden? He is starting not to know why he does things...Jealousy will do that to you? LOVED every word. ...MORE
Love Zuko's and Fu's interaction I'm thinking maybe violence could result in a meeting between them no matter what Xin has to say. LOVE Sokka and Toph. She would murderalize that Ming person. What is Zuko going to do to our Water maiden? He is starting not to know why he does things...Jealousy will do that to you? LOVED every word. ...MORE
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April 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love this so far...just update more often!!!
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Somehow I clicked out of the story but got back. Dude write on!!! I see JEALOUSY!! in zuko's future. Xin fu ? Sokka and Toph yes. Keep it coming SyJen