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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this still. This story is awesome and so is the way you write it. Your writing is fresh , beautiful and humorous without being obnoxious. The humor is very subtle and that is what makes this excellent.I can hardly wait until you post again. Oh please don't take too long this is too awesome to delay!
OrangePeelings
OrangePeelings
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was beautifully done.
I REALLY WISH you would update this more. It is SO Amazing. I love it.
FAB
I REALLY WISH you would update this more. It is SO Amazing. I love it.
FAB
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see your back.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is my all time favorite story and You write it. I love it because it is done with ease. You can tell in the writing that you trully enjoy this and the reader will also. It is flawless and has all the components of a masterpiece in the making. I know I am one to talk but update soon this story keeps me going and gets my writing juices flowing.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOU are back let the trumpets proclaim your return.
This was absolutely brilliant. I love your writing attempts LOL . Do not sell yourself short you are a terrific writer let me tell you that right now. I love this story don't let it slip again. Update!
This was absolutely brilliant. I love your writing attempts LOL . Do not sell yourself short you are a terrific writer let me tell you that right now. I love this story don't let it slip again. Update!
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Long awaited and well worth it.
I love the tension and hate that roams between Katara and Zuko. I love the the jealousy between Xin fu and Zuko. I love this story and your telling of it. Awesome job and keep UPDATING!
I love the tension and hate that roams between Katara and Zuko. I love the the jealousy between Xin fu and Zuko. I love this story and your telling of it. Awesome job and keep UPDATING!
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story! can't wait to read the next chapter!
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yes... zuko has made his choice. the question is can he win katara's heart? n what dirty scheme is xin fu cooking up now? please update soon.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite avatar fanfiction.( No pressure) I love the construction of your story. It is different and exciting. I am anxious to read the next chapter with all the secret desires in the palace I wonder what will happen next. Ajax
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like it and can't wait till your next chapter