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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done. I want more please.
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great, great chapter. This story is coming along NICELY. I love the new summary short and to the point. Keep up the fanstatic work it is showing.
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November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, I wait for more. This was well worth the wait. Nicely done.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was the best yet. I applaud your work. Your writing just gets better and better and it is showing. This story is awesoem and I want more. Excelent job!
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You know it is amazing how changing the words of a summary can give one the fire to write again or to fall in love with their story again. I think your new summary is spot on.
There are plenty of Zutara fics in this section. Many with the same plot of Katara having to marry Zuko for one reason or another. I do not think one is better than the other it all comes down to what stlye of writing gets your attention. I happen to like yours and the progression of its improvement. It was not bad before but this chapter was excellent.
Your type of writing gets my attention. I think it is ,even cleaner now, with just that hint of humor bordering on sarcasm. I love that. lol
I adore this story and will be waiting for your next update with hunger. Keep going Viewerfinder
There are plenty of Zutara fics in this section. Many with the same plot of Katara having to marry Zuko for one reason or another. I do not think one is better than the other it all comes down to what stlye of writing gets your attention. I happen to like yours and the progression of its improvement. It was not bad before but this chapter was excellent.
Your type of writing gets my attention. I think it is ,even cleaner now, with just that hint of humor bordering on sarcasm. I love that. lol
I adore this story and will be waiting for your next update with hunger. Keep going Viewerfinder
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know i think your writing is getting better...this was my favorite chapter so far really great job on this i hope your progress continues keep up the great work and update soon
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It is very good to see that you have returned to us. I have been waiting this is my favorite story. This chapter was lovely please oh please stay with us and FINISH THIS AWESOME STORY.
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was beautiful, intriguing, sexy, and funny all rolled up in an AWESOME chapter. I loved it. The construction of all your chapters is magnificent. I am so HAPPY that this is back and I am looking forward for MORE!
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I know that has been said alot but I do. I love how it just pulls you and keeps you there. It never gets boring or long winded. This is a well constructed and written story. You are amazing and I do HOPE that you update MORE because this story deserves an ending Stone2fire style, which is AWESOME.
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES YES I think you should UPDATE this ASAP. This is a trully beautiful story. Fabulous job. Eppie