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Once again you did not dissappoint. This was well worth the wait. I can not wait to see if Zuko takes Iroh advice and treats Katara to a day in the town. Fu is so not right. I can not think what he is going to do with Ghee if they team up it will be bad for Katara no matter what. Love this

I took my time reading so I could savor every word that you have written. This is one of those rare stories that once you finish it you will start all over again. It is just too good to stop. This is an awesome story and I can not wait to read more of it. SyJen

I had to go back and log in.

It took me months to get to it but I got to it. You have got to updtae. I am totally addicted to your way of writing. You have shown that one can improve with every chapter. I am impressed and hunger for more.

I love the interaction of your characters. This is hard to do and sometimes it can get boring to the reader if the writing is bad or has no flow to it. YOU do NOT have that problem. I absolutely LOVE the humor and the mixture of violence and anguish.You do it well. Keep t going and I promise it will not take me months to read your next attempt at writing. Yeah right Bluflame

I love the slow build up and the suspense.

This story is so awesome. I love interaction between your characters. Most stories I have read fall apart with this and the whole thing becomes stale and boring. You do not have this problem it just flows from your mind to the screen. I love the subtle humor. One does not find that in many stories in this section. The stories here are mostly drama upon drama. I can only take so much of that. I want you to FINISH this it is AWESOME!

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It is awesome to see you back and writing again. This was an exceptional chapter. I loved the flow of it. You did an awesome job and just added to this already excellent story. This is one of the few stories that I can read from chapter one until whatever chapter you have finished. Please finish this story, it deserves it.

Oh I love it. You came back in Stlye! This story is awesome I hope you continue with it and believe all the praise you are getting on your improved writing. It was good before it just got better and noticeably so.

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This was the best chapter you have written for this story. I mean the others were good but with this one you could see improvement in every word. I love the subtle humor in your writing it makes this story refreshing and beautiful. I absolutely am THRILLED that you are back. I missed this. Keep writing you ARE fanstatic at it.

You should write more often I think you are good at it. I love this story it is refreshing and I love it if I did nto say that before. You keep going and I will keep reading. You are doing an excellent job for someone attempting to write.