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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cool cool liking this story more and more keep up the good work and update soon
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January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is just so awesome. You are awesome at consrtuting a story. Everything has an action and reaction. I love the dialogue and you are a GREAT writer. Great writers ALWAYS work on improving their work. YOU Are doing an AWESOME WORK! Reena
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I see trouble with a capital Xin coming for Katara. I Love her attitude towards Zuko. I love that he wants her but then thinks she is not as good as others say. He still doubts her I think and that just adds to the dynamic between them you have here. I fear that if Xin and Ghee somehow prove her a rebel Zuko will turn on her. NOOOOOOOOOOO! This story is AWESOME! LOVE SOME MORE...!
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January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome. I love how katara is fighting zuko every step of the way. Her goal is to leave the palace alone and now it seems Zuko has other plans for her...I LOVE IT!
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January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is just excellent. Your construction of each chapter is so crisp. You are just getting so good at this. I loved this chapter. I love this story.
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What an Awesome chapter!!!
What goodness could come from Ghee and Xin Fu. I worry that he will not care if Katara is protrayed as a traitor just as long as he can have her. He is a very cunning man and he holds his anger well for now. I wonder though when Zuko and Katara start to show an equal attration to each other how well his temper holds.
I love the thought of Zuko and Katara going out on a date. I can not wait for you to post that! I can only imagine you have to write it as only you can.
What goodness could come from Ghee and Xin Fu. I worry that he will not care if Katara is protrayed as a traitor just as long as he can have her. He is a very cunning man and he holds his anger well for now. I wonder though when Zuko and Katara start to show an equal attration to each other how well his temper holds.
I love the thought of Zuko and Katara going out on a date. I can not wait for you to post that! I can only imagine you have to write it as only you can.
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can not wait for more of this story. You have just blossomed with your writing. I am in love with your style and want more of it. I just know after this beautiful story is finished I will read it all over again it just has that appeal. Keep going evoD
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very Well Done!
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The flow from one chapter to the next was perfect. I did not even want to go to the little girls room I was so wrapped up in this story. It is amazing the improvement in your writing in each chapter. This story is addictive and I wish you would get the sudden urge to update like some mad woman! I LOVE IT!
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January 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story!