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February 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh please do update soon because this is the greatest story and I love it. Awesome stuff.
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn you sanyo....great job on this fic....if they would have continued then zukos guards could have seen katara get deflowered...i bet she happy sanyo interrupted update soon please please please
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting for a while and you ALWAYS come through with Awesomeness. Love this story more than anything on this page.I always look for updates and I will be looking again. FAB
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome work! Love how Zuko is using his sexiness to get her to crack and I think it is working. I love thier thoughts on the subject. Oh this story is the best and I mean that. You have created a masterpiece in my mind so keep adding to it.
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was intense. I love how Katara is resisting him at every chance she can get...and that makes him to just more persistent! very hot.
Can't wait to see what happens next in this story, if Zuko has his way, she will be pregnant before the month's end! lol.
Can't wait to see what happens next in this story, if Zuko has his way, she will be pregnant before the month's end! lol.
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February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If there is anything better than this story I have not read it. Love the writing and how well put together this story is. I love how Zuko toys with Katara until she can no longer take it and slaps him. Love their individual thoughts and the way you convey them is exceptional. I can not express my need to read more please haggle over your next chapter quickly and post I will be waiting. Viewerfinder
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps rolling! It is the most awesome story on this page. I am always happy to see an update from you because I know it will be fanstatic and this is no exception. I love it! DB
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January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my all time favorite stories. You are so good at pacing and constructing it is down right criminal. I hope you grace us with more of your work soon because it would be a shame if you just stop after this awesome story is complete. I want more of this though ASAP. WalkingPapers
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CONGRATS on 10,000 hits they are rightly deserved.
This chapter was thrilling and awesome. I see that Katara can not trust herself alone with Zuko. He does help that situation by being down right naughty and sexy at the same time. I love this story. Keep it up you are fanstatic. Lillybugs
This chapter was thrilling and awesome. I see that Katara can not trust herself alone with Zuko. He does help that situation by being down right naughty and sexy at the same time. I love this story. Keep it up you are fanstatic. Lillybugs
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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the best story in this section I think. You prove one can improve their writing if they try. This is a well written and constructed story. I am blown away and continue to want more. This is my drug and it is Awesome! OrangePeelings