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March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent story. All the componenets for a masterpiece are on the screen in every chapter. Your writing skills improve with every punch of the keys. The way you construct this beautiful tale is perfect!!! I want to say Bravo and that you are awesome. PLEASE update this is too good to turn away from I am mesmerized.
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oohhh...I really love this story!! I've just discovered it and I must say I've fallen in love with the whole thing. I can't wait to read more and keep up the great work!
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude I have been following your story for a while, and I have to say each page gets better and better. You definitely have captured my attention and managed to impress me with your ability to create not only a dramatic but suspenseful as well as tastefully seductive story. If you keep this up I may have to commission a story from you for myself if that is possible.
I'm anxiously waiting for your next installment.
I'm anxiously waiting for your next installment.
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love your work! This chapter had all the elements to make this story the best. This was well constructed and flowed effortlessly. Please continue I am anxious to see Sokka's plight and just what Zuko and Katara are doing.
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job. I loved this chapter! This story is too good and I hate that I have to wait for more but I will because it is SOLID AND AWESOME
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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Truly a most engaging piece of writing, well done!
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And so the plot really thickens.
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I absolutely love this story. This chapter was spectacular. Love the triangle. Sokka has some stuff to think about. Beautifully done. I think Azula is still EVIL. I think she is the cause of all the problems with Zuko's Kingdom. I need more please write you are fanstatic at it!
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it!
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is so well constructed and awesome I do not ever want it to end. I lvoe how you showed what the others were doing while Zuko and Katara are away. Sokkka has some problems. This chapter was RXCELLENT and I can read and feel the enjoyment you had writing it because I enjoyed reading it.
You are awesome and I hope you write more stories because you are a breath of GOOD and AWESOME AIR ~vibe~
You are awesome and I hope you write more stories because you are a breath of GOOD and AWESOME AIR ~vibe~