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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Umm, so did Butch just get better on his own, or did they just sort of forget about that? And getting a little better on the tenses, but still needs a little bit of work. Pretty good lemons all around. And is that the end, or are there other chapters to come?
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! lol It's exactly how I'd figured they'd end up anyhow. Thank you ^.^!
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! ...Planning on any future chapters, or is this it?
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just a suggestion, but this should really be in past tense, not present. Either way, not bad, not bad at all.