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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! this story is really good! The plot development is nice - all that it needs is just a tiny bit more smut. But, the story is good, the characters are developed - there is detail, which really helps. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is so not fair! It's getting better and better and better. I love the cliffy! I wanna know what happens next. ANyway, keep up the great work. Have a great New Year and Happy Holidays. Later. K15
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I didn't think the water thing was over the top. You obviously are very thoughtful and insightful in your characterizations and psych. Very nice. So much detail. And you gave a lot of insight into Azula in this chap. I can totally see expressions and nuance of feeling of the characters.
I am loving it...
Happy... everthing!
I am loving it...
Happy... everthing!
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December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
zuko is gonna get killed or something by his father antway... not surprised. i hope aang gets better soon the world needs him a great deal now. is mai gonna try 2 kill katara since azula wont remove her from zuko? how r sokka n toph gonna save aang n katara? so many questions.
By the way... Happy Holidays
By the way... Happy Holidays
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is very well written, please, continue writing.
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This intrigues me. I am very eager to see more.
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good job with this i love to see where you will go from here keep up the good work and update soon
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good story so far. :3 Can't wait for your next chapters. :3
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good so far. Update soon.
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's nice to see that "Zuzu" isn't evil - i think they messed that bit up in the finale. You have Azula's attitude down pat! good work.