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June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was really good. The descriptions were amazing and detailed. Great job!
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July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was an interesting story.when i read the review i didnt know what to expect, but that was a good -if not a bit disturbing- story.
*Liz*
*Liz*
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February 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome incest.Please more.
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
meh, its good, i still want to see a Mai/Katara, with Mai using a Aprodisiac to help her enslave katara
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now that was a good story. hakoda's definitely a DILF! Bato's not too bad either... :) wish I were katara!
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January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW!Is all I can say.
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh noes
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good for your first threesome! ;)
NOT into incest but all I had to do was just imagine me in Katara's place and the story worked just fine! I wouldn't mind calling Hakoda my daddy...yummy yum yum!
You're a great writer!
NOT into incest but all I had to do was just imagine me in Katara's place and the story worked just fine! I wouldn't mind calling Hakoda my daddy...yummy yum yum!
You're a great writer!
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man! I really thought this was going to be sick. And it was -sickeningly sweet. Katara with older guys is... hot. Never thought i'd say that. You gotta write more stories like this, especially threesomes m/f/m. Your stories are not just good, they are so erotic... I really hope you'll put up another fic soon, and even better, turn this fic, WoaCN, into a series...
Good luck and i'll be checking for an update always// ^_^
Good luck and i'll be checking for an update always// ^_^
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man! I really thought this was going to be sick. And it was -sickeningly sweet. Katara with older guys is... hot. Never thought i'd say that. You gotta write more stories like this, especially threesomes m/f/m. Your stories are not just good, they are so erotic... I really hope you'll put up another fic soon, and even better, turn this fic, WoaCN, into a series...
Good luck and i'll be checking for an update always// ^_^
Good luck and i'll be checking for an update always// ^_^