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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is very good, you should continue with it.
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great start, can't wait for more
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol. Rons totally oblivious. This story sounds funny. keep writing
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad start. i'm interested to see what you do with this.
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh wish this conch were Kim's ...... GAH gotta stop thinking like that. Wonder where the rest of the squad is?
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch.2 has arrived and it was pretty good. We found Kim and we had the plane crash :) Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good start. Hope you update soon!
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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning. Good pacing. keep up the good work. The only advice I can give is to proofread. Don't just trust the spell-checker. And we need more hotties in 'creatively damaged' outfits.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A pretty good start so far and I am looking forward to seeing where the dtory goes :) Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-i wonder what the conch signifies.
excellent chapter!
excellent chapter!