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for A Love Estranged

by JayRockah

person izaku
schedule February 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
plez i beg you finish this story your a good writter. i hate to see a story unfinished. ur the best ive came across in awhile.
person HateMeForever
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
. . . um. . . this story was good. . . but it did scare me in some parts. . . BUT It was my first slash pairing and i . . . i liked it! Do continue this story, i can't not wait to see what happens next. (This story was recommended from my friend)
person Shutupandsmile
schedule July 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow my friend told me to read this story and it was amazing! You have just gotta update soon! At first when my friend told me about this story i was horrified... but now i love this couple! Must go find pics on it or draw them my self! I wish more peoples knew about this couple so there would be more storys about this. So please updated soon!
person Amanda
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG MUST READ MORE!! PLEASE UPDATED SOOON!!! OMG PLEASE I HAVE TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS!! I knowz you haven't written since last year. . . but PLEASE please please right more. . .
person Naruto_luver
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good story! Keep up the good work! Can wait till you update the next chap.
person SasuNaru
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow what an awesome story! Usually i stick to ya know Naruto storys with Sasuke and Naruto. . . togather, but my friend told me about this story and it was just pure awesome you must write more to it. It is so beautiful and well. . . i just have to know what comes next in the story. . . please don't leave me hanging. . .
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is getting good! Update some more please.
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! That was sweet o-o but whats going to happen now? Is there gonna be more chapters to this because meega hate the succubus already XP Though I know how to defeat it experiment style! =P Since I hear that succubusses are weak to a song being sung backwards, MAYBE there could be a plot where the solution to this mess is that there could be a plot where stitch would have to try to convince his formal buchiboo ANGEL to sing her siren song backwards at 628! =P

what do you think?
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like where this is going! Keep the chapters comming, and I shall continue to review!
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
These chapters are great, I don't know why you don't have any reviews yet! Please update soon!!! @_@

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