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November 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Well, I've been going back over many pages of fanfics to see what it was I thought of one or another, and came to realize I don't have anything down for this?? Its the "prequel" to `Toph Always Tops`, and I've made 3 to that one. So, had to first reread this to get in a frame of mind. I found myself once again charmed by how you had Katara react, then respond, to Toph in their first time together. Oh, so innocent, indeed.
So, as a first time, it is just fine. It has a calm beauty in its showing of tender love.
Thanks, again.
So, as a first time, it is just fine. It has a calm beauty in its showing of tender love.
Thanks, again.
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April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wish you wrote more. Like have Toph go back into Katara and have both girls 'see' one another together as one. I'm left speechless. I want more. I want more of my 'seeing' girls.
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story was well written and I hope for more of it, maybe with a little bending fun next time.
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. It starts out as something completely innocent and then just... wow.
Five stars for you.
Five stars for you.
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March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Your yuri stuff is so much fun! I hope you do something else soon!
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November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to write more?
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story. Are you going to continue?
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story. You should write another.
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November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
There's not enough decent Katoph on this site. Will you do more?