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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES!! YES!!! Frenzied, crazy, animalistic sex!! BRAVO!! That was AMAZING! And I'm sure Zuko and Katara are thinking the same thing. XD
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August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!! More hot steamy lovin' (pun intended) from our Yin and Yang couple! <3333 Your writing is just absolutely amazing and I cannot express enough how much I enjoy reading it. I look forward to more chapters!
I know that this is the prequel to Kiss of Fire, so I'm guessing that Katara's gonna die, right? :( Is so sad...
I know that this is the prequel to Kiss of Fire, so I'm guessing that Katara's gonna die, right? :( Is so sad...
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August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the chapter. So sweet and passionate. I hope you keep updating this story with LOTS of smutty make up sexin while these two get to know each other really-really well. A special request: PLEASE don’t make this story the prequel to Kiss of Fire. I don’t want either of them dying, even if she reincarnates. PLease, give them a sexy happy ending. I’m a total wuss, I love happy endings.
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok. Don't take this the wrong way -- but I think this chapter is the single-best-written chapter you've ever written for any of your Avatar fics. :)
The interaction between Katara and Zuko in the bath, the building of their trust into friendship, and then into a realistic transition to intimacy, was absolutely amazing (and you did it and made it read so naturally!!!). That was amazing!
(Also, Zuko appearing after K says goodnight to Aang and pulling her into the darkness while he says, "Sleep with me," is HOT. Seeing Zuko vulnerable but open with Katara is such a great mark and maturity of his character.)
Great job, thank you so much for sharing!!! ^_^
The interaction between Katara and Zuko in the bath, the building of their trust into friendship, and then into a realistic transition to intimacy, was absolutely amazing (and you did it and made it read so naturally!!!). That was amazing!
(Also, Zuko appearing after K says goodnight to Aang and pulling her into the darkness while he says, "Sleep with me," is HOT. Seeing Zuko vulnerable but open with Katara is such a great mark and maturity of his character.)
Great job, thank you so much for sharing!!! ^_^
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August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is a great story! I can't wait for the next update! ^^ Long live Zutara!
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August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I really liked that ending! I think Zuko's gentle side is what started the whole Zutara fandom in the first place. :)
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omnomnomnom!
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August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! Keep writing!
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Foot play. Scar-rubbing. Sex in the bathtub. Honestly, this scene is pretty damn hot... Go Zutara! Go Spleef!
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August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter and lemon!
it was so steamy :p
can't wait to see how they get closer and closer to each other
it was so steamy :p
can't wait to see how they get closer and closer to each other